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UNIT 30

Assessor Declaration

Task 1

Television Advertising Commentary

 

Hey everyone! I'm Mark and...

..today, we are going to be talking about Television Advertisements, and we’ll be specifically analyzing 5 adverts, each one adhering to one or more forms of advertising.

I will be talking about the 5 advertising forms; Realist Narrative, Anti-realist Narrative, Documentary, Talking Head, and Series.

METLIFE – MY DAD’S STORY

First we’ll be talking about an advert with a realist narrative; Metlife’s My Dad’s Story Ad.

In this ad, Metlife has decided to produce a relatable advert with a realistic narrative and a dramatic style. This makes sense because insurance is something that most actually need in their life so the ad can apply to almost anyone. But what Metlife wants, is for you to choose them over everyone else and the way they’ve decided to do this is to pull at those heartstrings and make you feel emotionally connected to the advert and quite possibly the company.

This ad is all about emotion and getting those tears to trickle, and they try to do this by using a series of tricks. The first is the surprise or ‘shock’ factor. This ad doesn’t necessarily do this in a drastic fashion its actually very subtle and not even necessarily ‘shocking’ per say but follows the same principles; Make a person feel one way and then immediately make them feel the complete opposite. Putting these two contrasting emotions one after the other often makes the latter emotion even stronger, therefore making the ad more effective. In the ad they first show us the positives; the girl is reading out her poem, as a series of clips of her and her dad having fun, living the perfect life playout. Then she reads out the line 'but he lies' and that there, is the climax. The moment when those emotions change, almost immediately. Now the emotions have changed into feelings of sadness, sorrow, pity but also respect as the girl talks about her father with clips of him moving from job to job, and doing manual labor, essentially working his ass off for his little girl and lying about it to make her feel better which I’m sure is something a lot of parents can relate to. The next heart-string pulling technique that the Metlife has adopted is the correlating relationship between the music and the editing of the video. As the music gets louder and faster, the clips also start to cut from one another faster. The combination of both the powerful music and the dramatic footage targets two of the sense at the same time, producing and even stronger effect. GENIUS!

Characteristics, what is it about this product that actually makes you want to buy it? That is what an ad usually has to answer. In Metlife’s case, they have offered one primary benefit; a better life and a promising future for you child. Metlife is essentially selling Educational insurance, so they have decided to tackle the topic of the dreams and the futures of children, something that a lot of parents would want their children to have. Phrases like ‘A child’s future is worth every sacrifice’ and ‘Pursue more from life’ are about the quality of life, and the role of a parent and its all about your childs future! Its not about you! And this is essentially supposed to instill a certain sense of duty in you as a parent, the duty to buy educational insurance from metlife!

Who? Who is this advert targeted at? That is the question isn’t it. Because when you make an ad, knowing your audience and who you actually want to be effected by it is going to take you a long way. In my opinion there are 3 main types of audience you need to think about. Psychographics, Demographics and Age group. Psychographics is essentially the personality type and I have identified Metlifes target audience to be The Mainstream and The struggler.(insert psychographics image for explanation) Mainstream because education is something everyone has to go through an experience and the struggler because the ad tackles unemployment. Demographics is a way to identify the social classes and in Metlifes case, I have found that the ad most likely appeals to classes E to C1; the lower half of the table, E being all unemployed persons or the lowest grade workers and C1 being lower middle-class workers. And finally, I have concluded that the advert targets people of ages 18 to 45. I start at age 18 mainly because that is the youngest possible age (I do “” because there are some exceptions of course) for a person to have a child eligible for primary education. I end at 45 because that tends to be the general age people stop making babies.

MEXICO AVOCADOS – ALIENS

Mexico Avocados here have produced an anti-realist advert with a surreal and humorous style. It is an ad set in a space ship setting with Alien characters being given a tour of the human race. The fact that Mexico Avocados are part of the exhibition and that aliens like it as well implies the importance of it as a product provided by humans in a hilarious manner.

Of course, what happens in the ad is not realistic, and doesn’t derive from any real events. But what it does do is pick at certain first world creations or problems and exaggerates the importance of it, leading to a fairly hilarious outcome. For example; calling airplanes a torture device, poking fun at the concept of emojis, saying that the white and gold dress ‘caused a civil war’. These are all things first world citizens will in a way ‘relate to’ or understand because things that don’t really matter like the white and gold dress have caused major debate online. Almost all people with an online presence will get the joke and feel smart about it and feel special for getting it, naturally appealing them to the advert. The ad begins with the rubrics cube, a very popular toy that has been around since the 80’s, the ad talks about how people considered it unsolvable, making people out to be fairly stupid. This is self-deprecating humor which is often the easiest to get. Next came the Airplane joke, this is the most widely relatable one because most first world people will have been on one at least once in they’re life and they will understand the “struggle”. As you can see the ad starts off with the jokes that target larger audiences, this is simply to gain the attention of the audience so they keep watching and so they can see if they get any more of the jokes. Of course, at the end of the tour, they reveal the Mexico Avocados. Even though none of the jokes relate to avocados, it still draws audiences in and that’s the point. The point of the ad is simply to gain people’s attention. The color palette is also very bright and colorful, another way to attract attention.

In terms of characteristics, Mexico Avocados ad doesn’t really talk about it. Like I said most of the ad is simply to gain one’s attention because the fact is everyone knows what avocado is and how its supposed to be, there is nothing about the product that is supposed to be different from others. However, near the end the Tour Guide does mention Mexico Avocados always being in season and always being fresh which is its main selling point. “always in season” is also the motto of Mexico Avocados and is said in all their ads.

The ad targets the mainstream, the explorer, and the reformer on the psychographics table. It appeals to Demographics C2 to A and ages 16 to 45; anyone who essentially has access to the internet and understands all the modern jokes.

And ofcourse you can’t forget the short catchy theme song/phrase 'avocados from mexico' .

APPLE – INTRODUCING IPHONE 7

Apple’s Introducing iPhone 7 ad is a realist documentary form advert and is essentially the most basic advert; simply explaining the qualities of the product itself. The video demonstrates all its perks as the technicalities are being explained.

Documentary adverts are often boring, slow, and is a rather old fashioned television form. However, apple has approached this form in a youthful, modern way by pairing crisp narration with top quality video footage and good computer-generated images of the phone and its insides. The Advert is also fairly fast paced, with interesting cinematography, constant camera movement, panning and great depth, producing a beautiful bokeh effect in every shot. The quality of the video suggests the same quality in the phone, and works especially perfectly seeing that its primary selling point is its great camera, lens and flash. The shots are extremely vibrant and full of color, containing lots of neon lights in the background of most shots, conveying a sense of youth and energy. The theme of light and youth is further augmented by the electric music. The music is also changes slightly every time the narrator begins to talk about another aspect, keeping the video interesting. The video also gives us the name of the narrator and his job title of VP, so we know who’s talking. This instills a sense of trust in the audience, because they actually have an idea of who is giving them all the information. This concept of trust was also gained through examples of photos taken by the iPhone.

The ad makes very big statements. Statements like saying that the iPhone 7 contains “the most powerful chip ever” and “It’s the best iPhone we’ve ever made”. Both these phrases are said in confidence and no hesitation whatsoever. This conveys confidence and allows the audience to trust what he is saying purely because he’s saying it with such purpose and understanding. He also uses “techy language”, certain words like “Quad LED, F1.8 Aperture” that most people probably wouldn’t understand, which is kind of the point. People don’t understand but alongside with the voice, and the brand people just accept and assume that it’s a good thing.

Now looking at audience classifications, It targets the mainstream and the explorer in terms of psychographics. I say explorer because the ad specifically advertises the waterproof aspect of the phone and of course the camera is also an attractive element to any explorer. I also say mainstream because it’s a phone, it helps us communicate and stay informed of each others lives and whereabouts. It appeals to demographics C1 to A, although a fairly expensive phone, smartphones are often products that people are willing to invest a pretty large fraction of there income to have, therefore this ad is appealing to fairly young audience who might not appear to have very high paying jobs.

OLD SPICE – THE MAN YOUR MAN COULD SMELL LIKE

‘The Man Your Man Could Smell Like” by Old Spice is a great example of a good talking head advert paired with humor. Throughout the whole ad, a shirtless man directly addresses the women in the audience, reassuring them that what they want is in fact “the man your man could smell like” – the Old Spice Man Isaiah Mustafa, a former NFL player.

The true genius of this advert is the supposed audience it addresses. The Old Spice Man Isaiah Mustafa starts off with “hello ladies”. Oddly enough, the product itself is not targeted at female audiences, but why has Old Spice then decided to address women? Because old spice know that men really only want to smell good for women, and by making them believe that women want a man like Isaiah Mustafa is a way to get them to feel insecure about themselves and go ahead and buy the product that can in fact make themselves smell like a woman’s dream boyfriend/husband, the old spice man. Phrases like “sadly he isn’t me” and “if he stopped using lady scented body wash and switched to old spice he could smell like he’s me” are said with total confidence, like the Old Spice man KNOWS that women want a man like him. Men start to worry because of this, and start to wonder if the Old Spice man Is what they really want. That is goal and I gotta say it’s pretty darn genius.

The old spice man is described as a Romantic Millionaire Jet Fighter Pilot and in the ad he starts off in a bathroom, then ends up on a yacht with hand full of diamonds. The man has already convinced the men of the audience that he is what women want, now he is trying another approach – if you buy old spice and smell like him, you will succeed like him and possibly even become a millionaire yourself. Men might not necessarily believe that but they can’t help but think it might help them get there or at least feel like a badass millionaire.

Old spice also uses other techniques like Celebrity Endorsement by placing Isaiah Mustafa a famous athlete as the main character of the ad. This grabs the attention of sports fans which are primarily men. Athletes are also often seen as the “definition” of a man which can also spark controversy, seeing as the ad is essentially saying that men aren’t men unless they’ve got money and the body complex of an athlete like Isaiah Mustafa. Many might also say the Ad is fairly sexist, putting down lady scented body wash because it’s not manly enough. It may put people off, but it also sparks conversation and spread word, attracting even more attention and gaining publicity.

OLD SPICE - AND SO IT BEGINS

Old spice is popular for its ads. In fact, ‘The Man Your Man Could Smell Like’ is part of a series of various ads made by Old spice all if not most consisting of the same forms and techniques. Some things do change depending on the product but are more or less based off the same concept and premise. They all consist of a talking head, and athlete and the theme of Manliness. Because of all these ads with the particular theme, the company has now developed an identity – The brand of ‘MALE’ grooming products. Previous old spice ads have been known to cast Terry Cruz a famous Body Builder, NFL player and actor. Terry Cruz’s ads were more about the aggressive, tough side of manliness. ‘The Man Your Man Could Smell Like’ changed that to promote the gentleman, the respectable husband material for their new product to produce a new identity but still conforming to its original theme of Manliness. Old Spice later combined these two persona's into one ad and got them to conflict. In those ad’s, Terry Cruz and Isaiah Mustafa kind of battle it out and argue over which one the audience should buy. Either way, both were old spice products and what Old Spice was trying to do was make you feel obliged to choose one.

Okay, I think it’s time we wrap up. I hope after watching this video you have a good  idea of what makes a great advert and maybe you’ll be able to make exceptional television adverts yourself.

Task 2

Television Advertising Pre-Production

pitch

Log

Entry 1:

I have started my Pre-production task by producing a mind map based around random product ideas. I leaned towards products that are well in demand here in Hong Kong. I eventually got to the idea of producing a Sriracha Sauce advert, knowing that it is already fairly popular in restaurants here in Hong Kong. I took this idea and drew up another mind map, trying to come up with key ideas and themes I could explore and apply to my advert.

Entry 2:

Since my previous entry, I have been developing my idea further. I have produced a general concept. After taking time to think, look at my mind maps and discussing my idea with Mr. Spashett, I have decided to make my advert fight against the misconceptions of Local Cantonese people as being rude, loud and hateful. I then produced a synopsis, and set out a narrative to follow and create further preproduction.

Entry 3:

I have classified my audience, based on how well my concept fits and how attractive my narrative may be to these deferent audience classes. I have identified the Psychographics, Demographics, Geodemographic, age group and other possible audiences. I will use these ideas to determine who I cast and how I produce my advert.

Entry 4:

Looking at my synopsis, I have produced a Script and Storyboard based on the same narrative. I have kept the dialogue simple and clear so that the audience knows what I am advertising and promoting but have still tried to make it appear natural and believable. I have also colored my storyboard to make it clearer who is who and what is going on for when I produce my advert.

Entry 5:

With my target audience in mind, I have produced a cast list, consisting of actors and actresses in their teenage years. I have also done further pre-production to prepare myself for production, writing a Film Schedule, a Location Scout, a Risk Assessment and Production Schedule.

Entry 6:

After looking through my ideas, I have decided to tweak my narrative because I believe I have come up with a better Idea. My story now starts off similarly by having Boy 1 react to a Canto man/woman screaming at a teenager, but this time I have added a flashback scene. This scene shows previous instances Boy 1 has had with the locals that cause him to feel the way he does. Then Girl flashes back to the same events but with subtitle revealing that the locals weren't being rude at all. Then she credits their over-expressiveness to Sriracha Sauce. I also edited the script complying with the resources available to me so I changed the Canto woman to a man officially, and added two new locations.

Here is an updated script:

Task 3

Television Advert
TASK 4
EVALUATION

How clearly is your message conveyed?

Not very clearly. Don’t get me wrong, my video does convey the message, just not as obviously as I would have liked. I love my concept but in my opinion my execution was poor. The Hong Kong element of things wasn’t very prominent, definitely not as prominent as I had intended. The only time Hong Kong is mentioned is once in the dialogue and as a motto at the end of the video. Visually, it does not ‘feel’ like Hong Kong. This is due to the fact that I failed to film in the town, which would have showcased urban Hong Kong. The colour palette is also very dull and does not adhere to the themes. I also feel like I may not have made the brand clear. In the video, I only ever mention ‘Sriracha Sauce’ but not the brand ‘Huy Fong Foods’. I also believe it is too long for an advert. By the time it gets to the end, people would already have changed channels due to boredom. The general concept is good, but I believe the narrative should have been made simpler for audiences to really understand the message. This video works more as a skit than an actual advert. The cinematography is there, it works and it’s easy to follow, It’s just not as concise and as quick as an advert should be.

 

How well did you target your audience?

I think I did this pretty well. The two main characters are teenagers which are also my primary age group making the video more relatable for that particular audience. The concept is relatable to expats and young tourists and adheres to the demographics that I have decided to target. My video attracts demographics C1 to A due to its fairly general theme, affordable product and simple dialogue. Being lost is translation is something I’m sure any foreigner would get a relate to and my video explores this concept well.

 

How well did you plan and prepare?

I believe I could have planned and prepared quite a bit more before the shoot, specifically the location scout and cast list. I had not properly scouted each of the locations and I failed to notice the possible distractions and difficulties of the bustling streets of Sai Kung. There was way too much background noise which I unfortunately didn’t foresee, causing me to later have to reshoot the scene in my home. Finding a cast was my biggest challenge; it was impossible to find a set of actors that properly fit my concept, especially the character of the Local man/woman. I was only able to obtain such an actor the day before my initial shoot and that was the only time I could film with them.

 

How technically competent is your work?

Sound tends to be my weak point. I have always had an issue with it in my past project and this video is no exception. None the less, it did improve quite significantly. It was hard; two shoots were needed to perfect it. First, I had filmed the scene of the Girl and Boy talking in Sai Kung Town where I felt the atmosphere was perfectly Hong Kong. However, the sound turned out appalling, impossible to read and quite unpleasant. You could hear kids shouting, people talking and plains flying. It was too prominent to be background noise and the voices of my actors were not clear at all. After listening to the footage, I decided that I would sacrifice the intended location and film in an enclosure where background noise was minimal, leading me to film in my home. At the time, I was at work experience and I was working with the schools AV-media department. Luckily, Mohit, one of the technicians was a sound expert and had been worked on professional productions so I asked him what sound recording equipment worked best for what situations. He said that the shotgun mic on a boom was the best option for me and he was correct. I used this to record the dialogue and it proved very clear. I just held the mic above the frame while my actors spoke and all was good.

Visually, the footage is well adjusted. I was particularly proud of my creative sweep transitions and next time I’d definitely like to experiment more with it. Focus rarely strays and the camera is still when needed and shaky when necessary. However, in my opinion my editing was slightly flawed due to my unfamiliarity with Premier Pro. 

 

How effective is your work?

Not as effective as I would have liked. Like I said, it was way too long and even though the message was fairly clear, it wasn’t distributed fast enough, losing it’s power over the audience. It’s comedy is also slightly lacking. Its starts off fairly mundane with very basic cinematography and dialogue with no real substance. Later, there are humorous scenes, but I believe they had appeared too late and I would have already lost half my initial audience.

What changes would you make?

 The first change I would make would be the location of my shoot. I would rather have the scene shot in an outdoor Hong Kong town environment like I had originally intended. Of course the reason I didn’t do this was because of the terrible audio but hopefully sound won’t limit me in the future after I develop better skills.

I would also spend more time shooting the scenes with the Local Man instead of doing it all in two shots. I’d try different angles and produce a greater sense of action and movement in each shot. These two shot’s were done to save time so next time I must start filming much earlier in order to have enough to produce a film to my best ability. 

In terms of editing, I would definitely apply more of the colour red and the themes of Hong Kong. Perhaps install a Hong Kong flag, or even produce a new logo for Sriracha with the Orchid symbol. 

What was the general response from your audience?

 Most found liked the concept and the idea of it. They also said the cinematography was good and the sound was clear. However, they found it slow just as I did and lacked a certain flair to it. I was told it worked more as a skit than an Advert. Some also found the video quite repetitive and that it would have been better if I had a wider variation of settings. They also found that the Canto Man wasn't associated enough with the product since he was never seen consuming it. An idea given was to have him announce the product at the end of the ad.

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